
"Biofuels: A Threat and a Cause of World Hunger"
Comment:
Thank you for a concisely constructed post on the evil effects of biofuel production on global famine. You clearly have conducted extensive research and gathered relevant quotes to support your argument against biofuels. I believe the unique structure of your entry, which incorporates passages from various secondary sources, is an effective method to engage your readers. By providing extracts from these external websites, which you justify and support with your own opinion, the readers are presented with a multitude of viewpoints on which they can accept or reject on their own discretion. For example, you take excellent snippets of information from the NY Times and the UK Telegraph which validate the credibility in your underlying argument. Having read other articles regarding this topic, I was pleasantly surprised to witness a fellow blogger lambasting an American biodiesel company and the hypocrisy of former vice president, Al Gore. I agree with your remark that in both cases, it is all about the money. Despite asserting to be an environmentally friendly company and compensating his own carbon footstep by unscrupulously purchasing carbon credits respectively, you accurately disprove their illegitimate claims. Given the ulterior motive of money that seems to be a common theme amongst governments and politicians around the world, what do you think should be done to provide greater transparency in political decision making?

"Left’s Favorite Economist Paul Krugman: Biofuels Are A Scam"
Comment:
I would like to thank you for your clear cut analysis regarding the current world hunger crisis. This topic is a emerging global dilemma that has caught my interest in the past couple of weeks. I had not previously considered the "biofuel scam," which critics blame for the starvation that is currently plaguing the world, until I came across your well construed post. As evidence from the article's persuasive tone, I firmly believe your ability to exude charisma through your prose is a quality trait that distinguishes you as a successful writer from others. In terms of the context, I also concur with the four key causes of this global emergency: the increased demand in emerging markets, high oil prices, bad weather, and most importantly, the rise in subsidized biofuel production. While I believe the facts and statistics that you incorporated in your entry are necessary elements, some of them are not well supported and seem a bit deceiving. For example, you claim that Brazil's use of ethanol from sugar cane actually "accelerates the pace of climate change by promoting deforestation." Even though ethanol production in Brazil may be indirectly related to global warming due to deforestation, you do not provide any empirical evidence supporting your assertion. How can you be so sure that Brazil's ethanol initiatives contribute more to global warming, rather than serving their intended objective of abating it? Although I understand the logic behind your statements, you lack well supported facts that would make your argument much more plausible. By integrating more numerical statistics throughout your entry that are linked to external sources, I am certain your work will become even more solid than it already is. Aside from my suggestions, I have much more to gain than criticize about this topic, such as learning about the shrinking of precautionary grain inventories. In response to this current food shortage, what are your thoughts on implementing mandatory grain reserves in the supplier countries to prevent similar situations from occurring in the future? Lastly, I admire your initiative in providing valid solutions in your closing remarks, as I too, hope to see a pushback against biofuel to ensure that no human has to starve to death because of excessively inflated food prices.